PLEASE READ IF YOU WANT IT TO MAKE SENSE. ...don't read if you don't mind not understanding.
Imagine this, people are waiting in line at a very busy 24 Emergency Clinic. A girl who appears to be perfectly fine, save for an annoyed expression and twitch in her eyebrow, waits in line. When she finally goes up to the nurse for medical help, the nurse asks her what's wrong. The girl responds with a blank stare. She blinks, twice. She then points behind her. The nurse turns her head to look. She also blinks, twice, and then looks back at the girl. The girl sighs heavily. "...You don't see it, do you? The giant monster that's been following me all day? The one that won't shut up??" The nurse pauses. "Excuse me?" The girl sighs again, even more heavily than before "...I think I'm cursed."
i'm kind of reluctant to post this...i'm not sure how people will react to such a piece. i really don't expect anyone to understand it without first reading that explanation. But it's an image taken from a manga idea that I have(well, developed while drawing it). I honestly did this entire picture on a whim. I was bored and thought, "Wow, wouldn't it be a cool scene to have some person being haunted by a big ghost/monster that no one else can see?" And to top it off, the ghost is really annoying even though it's scary looking. How awesome would that be i thought(haha).
Originally, I was thinking a gigantic ghost type monster from mario, something extreeeemely huge. ...the problem was that my computer couldn't handle it so i had to rework my idea. So the ghost had to be small. Anyhow, while i was drawing it i thought of a bunch of funny moments that could be derived from having a giant ghost cursing you and thought it'd be really cool... like when she first got cursed, or a moment when suddenly people can see it, or the ghost just being a really big annoyance on a date or some everyday thing.
For those kind enough to have read this far(thank you), here's a fun fact for you. The ghost has all 26 letters of the alphabet on him(i'm not sure why i did that, it sounded like a fun idea). See if you can find them, hehe.
I'm a Christian, I find nothing wrong with this (unless you know someone this happened to, in which case they need lots of prayer and possibly an exorcism), it's a funny piece and well done. I like the premise and it's carried through well.
oh yeah
nice.
you've got a way of putting a persons character onto paper
don't lose it.
good work! ^^